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Words?

We don’t need words
We’ll paint the sky a million colors
(With our actions alone).
Why words? We can
Gesture what words
Can't portray.

Tell me- don’t tell me
Because words are too much
(Too little too much).
I want to mime a poem;
Be a puppet-
For you.

Read me- don’t read me
Because words are not enough,
Paint on my empty canvas;
Draw me a map;
Trail in the sand, with a stick,
I'll find you.

We don't need words.
Love is a word that
Is just so simple, it
Lacks a comparison
To the real
Thing.
Words?
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TheAfterWhys Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ This is very creative, I really enjoyed reading it. It has a nice flow/rythm to it, and the feel of it as it rolls around inside my head is rather nice.
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auraginx Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you :D
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TheAfterWhys Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome. =]
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
okay, so i'm going to admit that i'm an awful person right now, upfront. and i want to tell you that i don't want to like your writing, purely because i get lazy and i watch so many people already. but i really enjoy reading your work. so i'll get over the laziness and watch you anyway.
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auraginx Mar 14, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw i'm glad :] Thank you kindly. I watch a lot of people too, I get like 100+ deviation notices per day.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
haha, same! i'm trying to catch up...again. i just caught up over the weekend, and i'm already behind. :no:
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MandieEllie Mar 13, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
very nicely done ^^
You worded it quite well. Makes me think about it :)
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auraginx Mar 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I want you to think about it, that's why I write. Thank you.
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